Thursday, 28 February 2013

Jo Webb: The Advanced Portfolio Evaluation

1. In what way does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products? 

Short films contain some of the most inventive and unconventional work to be found in film making. However, there are some common features that stand out from others and portray the style of film. Using Art of the Title 's 9 frame format, I have included 9 frames from my short film that illustrate signature scenes and features.


(From left to right) the first frame is a perfect example of how we have portrayed key props in our film through mise en scene. We used a close-up shot to identify the photo frame and become familiar with the characters in the photograph. As opposed to filming a medium shot where the audience look beyond the characters featured. We want our audience to raise questions such as who are these characters? By placing the Polaroid next to the photograph it may express characteristics of our main character to give a sense of their personality. The center frame on the far right also embraces a similar use of props alongside the portrayal of props that the character may use in her every day life, that also creates social realism.

An existing media product that I have previously reviewed called 'Lucky 13: PJ, Tiny Planet Explorer' uses a similar scene to reveal main props throughout the film. Although, it singles out each prop dominantly rather than complimenting each other.


I feel our title sequence compliments our short film successfully, from the choice of font with retrospective detail to relate to the retro use of prop. I have reviewed a number of shorts where I have identified eccentric title sequences that have inspired the style of our final outcome.
For example, 'The Wrong Change' title sequence incorporates a predictable prop of money being held by someone that goes on to reveal it is the films main character. I think it works as it suggests the prop is a response to the title. And it also uses a nice shallow of depth of field to focus on the title and prop.


In my short films 9 frame format I have included a few shots from the calender scene which exposes evidence of who the boy in the photograph's is. A particular favourite shot of mine from this scene is where we filmed an over-the-shoulder shot of our main character gazing into the calender. She is hiding the date current in the film, which is revealed in a following shot (centre frame) and indicated well by the previous dates being marked off. We used a focus pull in this shot to draw our audience in more, evaluating the event written down.
I have included more than a few screen grabs from scenes that indulge in the Polaroids as this is the main aspect throughout our film. I think we achieved a really good shot of the top centre image where the edge of the Polaroid slightly appears in the bottom of the frame as if we are from its point of view, and to also reveal her reaction. Two frames down reveals the graveyard scene that consists of the Polaroid imagery shot in the scenes location. I have pointed this shot out specifically as it portrays key themes of my film and similarities of the props and location. We recorded this scene from a number of different angles and shot types and felt using an over-the-shoulder shot from a low-high angle received the best view for recognising the key similarities and films narrative.

Considering narrative in mind, our short film is an example of Todorov's theory: Brother and sister live happily together in a family until her life is disrupted by his tragic death. She can't except this and struggles to come to terms with it, until a year later on the significant day where she is drawn to visit his memorial of death and finally accepts the situation, and her life returns to normality. This is a circular narrative. Our film plot takes part of this story and is similarly linear and chronological - referring to the significant day.

Referring back to the Virgin media's award winning short, 'Lucky 13: PJ, Tiny Planet Explorer', I can identify it also used a circular narrative in a linear arrangement. He plans on moving to the universe, eventually finding a planet to settle on. He plans his trip and packs his essentials, then when it comes to settling down on his chosen planet, it was ruined by his lack of preparation, which brought him back home. 


As a class and independently we have been studying British film posters to understand the conventions. A film poster's primary role is to advertise a film. Such conventions that are common in film poster's are:
  • Images
  • Eye catching titles
  • BBFC certification
  • Cultural references
  • Release date
  • List of actors 
  • Tagline
  • Awards
  • Credit/Production/Billing block   
  • Website
  • Critics praise 




I am aware that the names of actors usually appear, either prominently or understated. Images of the actors vary depending on the stylization of the film, but they are always featured in character to represent the film. It is a common convention of a film poster to use characters as the main image, otherwise they are placed over a background or setting that reflects the film. Or the image can be cropped.

Also, the main text is either kept away from the main image or placed over the setting and background. Often there is a relation between upper case and lower case text, ledding may be used. It is essential to assure there is a symmetrical distance between conventions when considering where they are placed on the poster.




Considering these conventions in mind, I have tried to incorporate the majority of them within my films poster design. My choice of imagery consists of a background image of our films main character that is thoughtfully layered with little use of text such as the title and reviews to be able to identify our character. It is important to consider the structure of my poster and how everything is aligned. I have placed the review quotes precisely between each edge of the characters hat in the background in a Typewriter font style to relate to my films signature font of the title. Furthermore, I have placed the 'O' in the title within the cameras lens to enhance the signature prop throughout our film. These are all aligned with the credit block at the bottom of the poster that has been de-saturated so it doesn't stand out amongst the other conventions.


























I think it was vital to include at least one of the Polaroid images within a final poster design so I have a large format of the one with the boy with his back to us in the centre of the graveyard as it creates more suspicion as to who the character is. Alone with the background image it didn't look enough so after experimenting with our other Polaroid imagery I decided to use the follow on image in the same location just without the boy in it. Combining these two similar images compliment each other and gives the audience a taster of the disappearance of the boy. Rather than just using the original images before we edited them into the style of a Polaroid, I think using the significant white boarder creates a dynamic response to justify the Polaroid being our main subject matter in our film. I have taken the white boarder for granted by placing companies logos and our own production companies design on top as they emerge nicely in as opposed to creating a dominant white block for them somewhere else amongst the poster.

Review

After studying Little White Lies film reviews we have come to recognise particular conventions that they interpret in every review they produce.

1. Layout



2. Language
Enjoyment from the reviewer who comes outside of the film to directly address the audience.


  • Compares characteristics,
  • Reference to actor,
  • Background information,
  • Literacy context,
  • Casting,
  • Key conventions,
  • Directors achievements/intentions,
  • Protagonist traits,
  • Key scenes,
  • Unique elements of film,
  • Plot description,
  • Title link,
  • Compared to Hollywood styles,
  • Negative aspects,
  • Inter textual references,
  • Evaluative of character/s,
  • Standard genre comparison,

  • Always critical in the end!



To be honest, I found it difficult to cover all of these conventions in my own films review the way Little White Lies discuss so sophisticated. It resulted in my task to write the review within our group which I felt nervous about as I feel I am not strong in my English language. But I have stuck to LWL's conventions as guidelines to create a direct response to our film putting myself in an audience's point of view.


2. How effective is the combination of your main product and your ancillary tasks?




3. What have you learned from your audience feedback?

It is essential that the audience feedback we receive is coming from representatives of our films target audience being a similar age to our main character.  I have made sure I am getting back feedback from both male and female representatives to receive balanced evidence. 





 From the feedback I have received, I have learned that it was not clear enough for my audience to acknowledge the relation between the young boy in the photo frames indoors with the older boy appearing in the Polaroids outdoors. To overcome this error we have used more than one scene with photographs of children, then added an additional scene oh her comparing a Polaroid to the location she is in using a close-up shot type.















4. How did you use new media technologies in the construction, and research, planning and evaluation stages?

Monday, 25 February 2013

Tigerlilly Winfield: Evaluation

1.In what ways does your media product use, develop or
challenge forms and conventions of real media
products?


THE CAMERA


1. The first frame sets the scene informing the audience of the setting and where our story takes place
2. The camera work and the focus pull in this shot inspired me to use focus pulling our short film as I think it looks really professional and leads the audiences focus.
3.This title clearly approaches the topic of themes and issues as the title is very relevant to the short film. 'The Camera' suggests that the plot has something to do with a camera and supposedly memories.
4.The girl pulls a camera out of a dusty old trunk which really gives the house characterization and suggests that the camera is old and aged.
5.The mis en scene is important in this film, they have chosen a key prop, the polaroid camera, as it is instant and allows the audience to see the photos within seconds. The story is that a boy keeps appearing in these photos and if she was using a normal digital camera the story would be very different and hard to comprehend.
6.This shot helps the audience understand what is happening, this photograph lets the audience see through the protagonists eyes. We can see what she is seeing.
7.Being able to see our main characters expression is key in this film as is creates a sense of character and furthers the characterization  it also allows us to see her reaction and develops the theme more. The camera work is focused on her face and the photo is out of focus, this is a nice use of camerawork as we still can see that she is looking at the polaroid yet the photograph doesn't distract the audience from her expression.


APRICOT

1. This shot opens the film, from this shot and the one following we have understanding that these two characters are on a date, it helps us understand the story. It also develops the characterisation between our two characters, we get to understand what they are like. Their costume is also a major part of their characterisation, the man appears quite smart and the woman seems to look more bohimian and we are communicated by her dark eye makeup that she is a lot more relaxed than him.
3. In this shot and also in the 5th screenshot we are presented with the focus on the apricot, this exaggerates the importance of the apricot and informs the audience that it is a major part of the themes and issues presented.
4. The sound in this scene is quite blurred and muffled, exaggerating the fact that it is a flashback, it is also out of sync and the camera work is quite blurry and distorted, this is a perfect way of emphasizing the flashback element.
6. The character here is drinking tea which again is another important hint at the themes and issues in this film. The lighting is really dark which makes you think that the atmosphere is quite tense. In this particular scene the lighting is very dark making us not able to see his whole face which shows clear importance on the teacup in the middle of the frame.
7.This scene is a flashback again, we see the boy taking loads of photographs. We also know at this point that the man drinking the tea has a memory problem. We put 2 and 2 together and immediately assume that he is the little boy.

8.The woman is taking is tea again a clear symbolism to the theme in this film. The camera work here is really important as we don't see her pick the tea up but we don't need to see this as it's not important. The framing of the tea makes it seem important.
9. In the final scene we understand the characters and it gives us a clear representation of them. The story all comes together in the end which is a nice journey through the story.


POLAROID BOY

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Narrative organisation:

The Narrative structure in short films is usually linear as the director/screenwriter doesn't have a lot of time to tell a story in usually less than 10 minutes. By using a nonlinear structure it could easily complicate the story line and confuse the audience. In the short film Apricot the narrative organisation is non linear which is unusual for a short film however this film is just over 10 minutes so there was a lot of time to explain the story which involved flashbacks. In polaroid boy the narrative structure is linear. In the beginning when thinking of ideas for our story we had the idea of using flashbacks or putting the beginning scene at the end, so having our protagonist Lola go out taking photographs (frame 6) first and then having a ‘3 hours later…’ to explain the story however we soon realized this would complicate our story line too much and by having our story non linear it would confuse our audience and not make a lot of sense. Our film being quite hard to interpret as it only includes one character and there is no dialogue we decided sticking to linear as our film was confusing enough.Considering narrative, our short film is an example of Todorov's theory: Brother and sister live happily together in a family until her life is disrupted by his tragic death. She can't except this and struggles to come to terms with it, until a year later on the significant day where she is drawn to visit his memorial of death and finally accepts the situation, and her life returns to normality. This is a circular narrative. Our film plot takes part of this story and is similarly linear and chronological - referring to the significant day.

Characterisation:
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Characterisation is an important factor in films. You have to portray your character correctly to get the right impression from your audience. In Good Morning Mrs Tucker we start feeling sorry for the main character Mr.Tucker as we see how frustrated he gets as his wife has a memory condition. It is important to have a strong character and be able to relate with your audience. If you want your character to be the protagonist and you want your character to be likeable then you need to work with your actor and make sure you present your character in a likeable manner. In our film we wanted our character to be likeable and we wanted to hold an emotional journey with the audience. As we find out in the end, Lola’s brother Tom has passed away and we want the audience to feel sympathetic towards her. Having no dialogue in our film it was easy to make our character likeable as we go on a journey with her step by step and there is no reason not to like her. If we wanted our audience to view our character negatively we could have involved some dialogue where she was either being rude or angry and that could have changed the audiences opinions.
 
Mise en scene:
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Mis-en-scene is usually used to show the social groups that are represented in the film. The opening scene in Polaroid Boy is an establishing shot of a big house (frame 1) which tells us this is a middle class house, further along in the film we see Lola turn off her alarm on an iphone which is another pointer to the class of our protagonist.
In the second frame we see our key prop, the photograph of our two characters, this is an important prop, by enhancing its significance we chose a close up apposed to say a long shot, if we had used a long shot the audiences focus would not have been on the photograph at all.

Lola is wearing shiny leggings and doc martins which are very common with teenagers at the moment so by choosing this costume it tells the audience that she is a normal teenager. Furthermore by choosing to use a polaroid camera rather than the usual digital camera tells the audience that she isn't your usual teenager. Our key prop, the polaroid camera was chosen due to it being so instant and we were able to see the photos immediately. If we had used a different camera it would have been hard to make a story out of it as for example if she was using a digital camera she would have had to go home print them out and then have seen the boy. Thats why using a polaroid camera was so important in our film.


Use of genre conventions:
The genre in Polaroid boy is a mix between adventure and fantasy. It was hard to match a genre to our film as a lot of short films don’t have specific genres. In The Beachcombers you start off not knowing what genre it is and then as we get to the ending and know more about our characters we then realize that it is a romantic film. This is the case with most short films as they start off very general and don’t appear to have a genre then towards the end we can classify the film into which genre it most fits into.  Short films are usually quite realistic and relatable so Polaroid Boy was a perfect example of this as the majority of people have lost a loved one and know that you have to let go, with our film being relatable it will gain more popularity.

The title sequence of our film compliments our story and film. The font we chose was typewriter style which makes us think of diaries and the past. The girl is obviously documenting her travels as she is taking photographs with her camera and I think that the font goes nicely with that as it's similar to a diary.

OUR REVIEW
From analyzing numerous little white lies reviews we picked up of a couple of techniques that were presented in each review:






FINAL POSTER:

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From my research into posters I realized that the poster of a film is an important part of marketing your film. Your poster must engage your target audience and also inform at the same time. I took this on board when designing my poster. I wanted my poster to come across as engaging, interesting and relevant to our film.

-I think my poster shows clearly an idea of our story. With the use of both the photograph of our main actress and our Polaroid photographs, it makes the poster eye catching and interesting.

-The large photo of our main character really exaggerates that she’s an important part of our film. We get to know our main character even before we have watched the film.

-I chose to have our character in close up as all we need to focus on is her face, I also chose this angle as I want the audience to be familiar with her face. As she is looking down its not an uncomfortable close up.

-The title of our poster is clear, informative and simple. The font I chose was a simple sans serif font, from our research we saw that very little short films used serif font so using a sans serif font it made our poster look more professional and genuine.

2. How effective is the combination of your main product and
ancillary texts?





3.What have you learned from your audience feedback?

For the majority of our audience feedback we used social networking sites as our target audience is teens from about 15+ and the majority of my friends on facebook are our target audience. We also used twitter however we were unsuccessful and didn’t get any feedback, I think the reason being was because on twitter you have a word limit and I think people had more to say about our film so they just went over to facebook instead.


FILM AUDIENCE FEEDBACK:

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As you can see above we didn’t get a huge response of audience feedback on our first exported video however the feedback we did get was really useful and helped a lot. Jo and I hadn’t really noticed the sound problems that Alex picked up on in the second screen grab so that was really useful in making the sound and the overall film improve. In the first screen grab Rosie points out our bad continuity, that our protagonist leaves the house without a hat and then magically it appears. This was one of our main problems when filming after we had filmed the outside scenes. Unfortunately Lola was unable to find her hat so we had to do without it. Obviously this is a key mistake as the mis en scene has to be perfect for the film to flow and to make sense. Next time I film I will make sure I do it in order so stuff like this doesn't happen. If we filmed the other way round we would have been able to get rid of Lola’s hat and our problem would have been sorted!
Even though we only got a few comments on Facebook we got a lot of likes which is a positive response however a comment would have been appreciated but by the likes that we did get I’m assuming they liked our film.



As asking for feedback on facebook wasn’t very succesful we decided to ask a couple of girls that had some time to come into our media room, watch our film and give their honest opinion and feedback to us as we filmed them.
This was a lot better than asking on facebook as it was easy to film and they gave us their opinions in detail and how we could improve next time.



POSTER AUDIENCE FEEDBACK:
As gathering feedback via social networking sites wasn’t particularly successful, I decided to send out a group message on my iphone which appeared to be a lot more popular with gathering audience feedback and I got a great response.
I created 2 posters and wanted to see which one my target audience liked the best and why.

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As you can see from the screen shots everyone preferred the second one, which was my favorite too. By gathering this information I can work out which poster to submit. On the last screen shot on the first line. Fleur points out that there is a colour difference where the credit block is, this is a good piece of feedback as I can now change the poster and make it better.

But overall our audience preferred the second poster because it is:
-Clear
-Professional
-Interesting
-Intriguing

-Neat
-Comprehensible

-Stands Out
 
4. How did you use media technologies in the construction and research, planning and evaluation stages?


Thursday, 14 February 2013

Review


Jo: Final Poster Design


This is my final poster design that I believe will accompany our film best. It is the design I previously posted and have now finished. I have added another Polaroid image that is a follow on from the original I featured with the boy in it so it will raise questions from the audience as to why he is not in the opposing image although it features the same location, to give a sense of our films narrative. 

I have placed the first 'O' in the title within the cameras lens to enhance the signature prop throughout our film. Rather than placing the title sequence and accompanying background image dominantly in the center of the frame, I have placed them both to the edge of the poster to make it more unique, and to allow space for the Polaroid images.
I have desaturated the background image to create a subtle fade into the Polaroids with white tones to relate to the images significant white boarders. I have featured vast number of logo's within the larger images white boarder so it is more subtle as opposed to creating a dominant white block of them somewhere else in frame. 
The film review quotes have been placed precisely between each edge of the characters hat in the background in a Typewriter font style to relate to the Films signature font.





Tiger: Poster Feedback

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To gather feedback for which poster to choose either:
OPTION 1

or
OPTION 2


I chose to send out a group text via my iphone as this is a direct way to ask people rather than giving them the option on either facebook or twitter. This way I can get an answer quickly as people always have their phones on them and may not neccesarily check their facebook or twitter.
This has proven to be a very succesful way of getting feedback and the people I texted got back to me within less than 10 minutes and the feedback I got was really useful and helped me devop further into which poster I should choose.

Over all I have learnt that next time I want to gather feedback, texting people gets the best results.

Wednesday, 13 February 2013

Tiger: Fianal Poster Designs

OPTION 1
 OPTION 2
Here are my final designs for our poster, option one was my first design. I like it but I wanted to further my design skills and produce something slightly different. The first one is too obvious and I think it gives our film away. Option 2 is my final poster design and I really like it. I think it looks really professional and engaging.

Tuesday, 12 February 2013

Jo: Production Logo

Seeing as making up a production companies logo isn't a crucial feature on our poster that needs a lot of planning and thought going into it, I quickly made this up in five minutes. The alliterative words popped into my head and seemed quirky enough to use, and Tiger agreed. I found the image on the internet, and seeing as it holds quite an historical appeal to it, I thought an obsolete Font style would accompany it well.
I constructed it all on Photoshop where I found the font 'Vivaldi. I used the Warp Text option so it arcs over the top of the willow image nicely. And that's about it for our Production companies logo.


Wednesday, 6 February 2013

Final Film

Tiger: Little White Lies review examples

After reading numerous little white lies reviews, I have understood the writing style and what we have to get across in our review.
Our review has to be as similar as little white lies as possible so we really have to adapt to their writing style.

Here are a few things I have noticed that we should include in our review:

-The style of writing is quite humerous and seems to make fun of the actors and the film but in an informative and integently written way.

-References to other films: The little white lies reviews seem to reference to numerous either similar films or films the actors/directors have previously starred in. They compare the film to these previous films.

-States the genre very clear for the audience.
-Name drops: lists the majority of the actors names and the directors.

-Quite critical, doesnt hold back with what the writer feels.
-Written very complex and uses unusual intellegent language

-A detailed yet brief summary of the film, giving the audience and idea of what the films about but still keeping some stuff secret so that you go watch it.

-Anticipation, enjoyment and in retrospect are the 3 final summary points on the film if you dont have time to read the whole review.

Tuesday, 5 February 2013

Jo: Indesign progression


Today we were introduced to Adobe InDesign for the first time. Following the steps in class I got the hang of it quite quickly as it has similar aspects to Adobe Photoshop. Seen above is just a draft of essential items needed such as our possible image portraying our film, ratings and the specific font sizes and styles used in Little White Lies .