Let go of the contrapuntal sound - it was an idea and not sure how it is relevant to this story. How will we know from the name on the stone that they are related? I think that if you want this to be obvious that you may need to work this in to the plot somehow. You have 5 minutes to fill - will this be enough? I feel that you may need some sort of start to the film - perhaps that could also establish why she ends up at the graveyard. Is she going to be surprised to see him in the photos? Will it upset her or thrill her? Will she be able to recognise that it is him? You need to resolve these few unresolved issues before filming really.
Let go of the contrapuntal sound - it was an idea and not sure how it is relevant to this story.
ReplyDeleteHow will we know from the name on the stone that they are related? I think that if you want this to be obvious that you may need to work this in to the plot somehow.
You have 5 minutes to fill - will this be enough?
I feel that you may need some sort of start to the film - perhaps that could also establish why she ends up at the graveyard.
Is she going to be surprised to see him in the photos? Will it upset her or thrill her? Will she be able to recognise that it is him?
You need to resolve these few unresolved issues before filming really.